Writing -2nd Person(short story that I made)

  I'm going to write the 2nd person's view..


  You wake up at 8'o clock. When you turn around and watch outside, you are at the KMLA dormitary!! You get out of your bed and go up to the 12th floor. There was some student eating breakfast, and some teachers were talking about students in KMLA. When you entered at the cafateria, everyone watch you at strange eyes. and said "Hey, Crawford!! you have to go to class right now!! Oh my god,, Everyone was looking for you!!"  You are very embarrassed and look around and ask where is the class. Everyone inside the cafateria looked disconcerted and teach the way to go to the class. When you go in to the class, teacher shouted to you  and say that
  " you didn't do your homework  3 times and also, you are late for class!!"
Teacher just come to you and say that you have to be hit. So you give your two hands and preparing to beaten. When your teacher came to you and beat you. But you didnot felt anything!! WOW!! So you look around one more time. But!! you are in your own home.. Oh,, It was your dream.. HAHAHA,, This was my short stort that I made..
Thank you~~